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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, we are living in a world always more international where many foreign
people
 travel to other countries to know other cultures and places.
This
 creates problems, some
people
 believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs but others think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. In
this
 essay, I will explain both statements and I will try to give the pros and cons.
On the other hand
, I believe that it’s very important to travel for many reasons,
first
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 you can know different
habits
such
 as the cookery and lifestyle.
Furthermore
, a lot of
people
 agree about
this
 and they are very cheerful because
for
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 instance, English tourists come to Italy, they must follow our
habits
. In my opinion, there is a huge difference between the English and Italian lifestyles, for ,instance we eat in the evening
while
 in England don’t eat and they must follow our
habits
also
 it’s very difficult.
In addition
, for a Chinese or a Japanese discover new
habits
 can be very hard because they don’t speak the Italian language and the writer is totally different from them.
However
, some
people
 believe that they should live
our
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 life without problems to lead their culture,
above all
 in the kitchen. In conclusion, the controversy surrounding visitors adhering to local customs versus embracing cultural differences has far-reaching implications.
While
 following host country conventions can avoid offence and hostility. It may
also
 lead to the contraction of diversity. Ultimately, promoting respect, understanding, and mutual appreciation should be the ideal approach in an increasingly interconnected world.
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