The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992.

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data provides information about the number of
cases
of
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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disease in Mashhad from 1983 to 1992.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that at the beginning of 3 years,
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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cases
in Mashhad remained relatively unchanged.
Besides
, the highest number was in 1989,
while
the lowest one was observed in 1992. In 1983, the line stood at about 100 incidents and
leveled
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off over 2 years from 1984 to 1985.
Then
it rose slightly to reach about 190
cases
of
diarrhea
in 1986.
This
increase was followed by another when in 1987 it was almost 200.
However
, it dropped back to approximately 100 in 1988. Suddenly,
this
downward line dramatically increased to about 400 in 1989 and again decreased to about 350
cases
.
Therefore
, it leveled off 1 year from 1990 to 1991 after which
diarrhea
entirely dropped to 0 in 1992.
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