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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given plans demonstrate an airport
site
 at the present time and how it is going to be after its redevelopment over the course of a year. As an overview, some new facilities will be constructed and some others will be replaced.
In addition
, both of the departures and arrivals areas will have two entrances
instead
 of just one entrance.
Also
, some new areas will be added to the top of the
site
. As can be observed, the check-in area will be relocated to the present
cafe
.
However
, the
cafe
 will remain, it will be relocated to the bottom left corner of the departures area.
Moreover
, the new bag drop will be constructed
instead
 of the present check-in space. The security passport control will remain in its location and some new shops are going to be above it. It is noticeable that the walkway area not only will be replaced by the sky train but
also
 the number of gates in
this
 airport
site
 will be extended from 8 to 18.
On the other hand
, in the arrivals section of
this
 airport
site
, a new
cafe
 will be placed in the top right corner and a new ATM will be located below
this
cafe
.
Furthermore
, the redevelopment plan illustrates a new car hire place that can be reachable on the right side of the entrance in the arrivals section next year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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