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some people think that all university students should study whatevere they like. others belive that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your opinion

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The most important moment in your adult life is when you are required to choose your degree between, something that you enjoy and something that will be useful in your future career,
such
 as technological and scientific abilities.
For
this
 reason, universities should ensure students have the possibility to make a decision that aligns with their principles.
Firstly
, having
people
 with competence in fields linked to science and technology is a guarantee of a florid
country
. In fact, engineers
along with
 architects are needed in order to build infrastructures, public transport and town facilities,
such
 as hospitals and universities themselves.
Hence
, a
country
 that does not allow younger
people
 to pursue technical expertise is a
country
 which is not growing.
Furthermore
, finding gainful employment is another reason why
people
 prefer to specialize in scientific degrees,
such
 as medicine and surgery.
However
, science-based courses are not always a guarantee for a remunerative job.
Secondly
, permitting students to express their interests in what they are studying allows them to feel more motivated not only for exams but
also
 as working
people
.
Hence
, humans who are motivated are
also
 passionate,
thus
 they will be competent professionals.
For
this
 reason, picking a degree that you like is crucial for the development of your
country
. In conclusion, I believe that the right is always in the middle.
Consequently
, each degree could be useful for yourself and for others around you as long as it leads you to your dream job.
Thus
, universities should improve all faculties in order to allow you to cultivate your interest at best.
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