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Band 5.5

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it? Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Hello taxi manager, I am Ozan, two days ago I used your car. When I got out of the car I left some important documents in the taxi. Obviously, documents are essential for my job. That's why, I have to take from you tomorrow.
On the other hand
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, these papers involve a lot of secret information about the company
which
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in which
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is
Unnecessary verb
apply
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I work. As far as I know, your taxi office is so far away from my home.
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 that, I can not come to your place to pick up the papers. If it is possible can you send all documents to my home? I know, I should not have forgotten information but I did.
This
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 is my mistake
nonetheless
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 I have no solution for that. I will send you my address information.
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, I will pay all expenses. I need to
reach
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 my letters.I should get to the meeting tomorrow.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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