The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided three categories from 1995 from 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided three categories from 1995 from 2002.
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The bar chart below illustrates the figures for
minutes
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of phone calls in the United Kingdom in three different parts between 1995 to 2002.
It is clear that
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the highest of calls happened in 1999 and 1998 related to local fixed lines
while
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the lowest of handset calls were in the first two years accounted for using mobiles. In detail, in 1995 most people used a fixed line in order to communicate for about 73
minutes
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, it increased significantly until 1999 reached 90
minutes
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.
However
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, from 2000 to 2002 the use of local calls decreased and reached 73
minutes
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which was equal to 1995. Regarding national and international calls, we witnessed an increase dramatically over 7 years. In 1995 individuals spoke for about 38
minutes
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in types of national and international calls
this
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growth continued until 2002 and reached 60
minutes
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.
Also
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, the number of
minutes
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on mobile phones jumped moderately from 1995 to 2002 approximately less than 10
minutes
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to more than 40
minutes
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respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommunications
  • Long-distance calls
  • Local calls
  • International calls
  • Duration
  • Fluctuation
  • Incline/Decline
  • Significant
  • Trend
  • Statistical data
  • Billion
  • Minutes
  • Graph/chart interpretation
  • Incremental growth
  • Stabilize
  • Peak
  • Dip
  • Plummet
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