You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Admission

tutor

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, I am writing to inform you that I may not be able to come for the interview and I am asking if it be possible for me to come the day after.

Beside

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that, I am working in those hours and my

schudule

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schedule

is hectic. I really need to come

however

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,

due to

the work I

definetely

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definitely

be able not to show up. I am asking if I could come the next day and do the interview. I am very interested

to

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in

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that course and I do not want to miss it. My family rely on that course because it going to benefit my family and

I

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me

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in the future.

Therefore

, I am asking how long it going to take during the interview and if there

any

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is any

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test

too

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to

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let me know so that I can

be prepare

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be prepared

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for that day. I appreciate your time and effort and I will hear from you soon, yours' Faithfully, Tokateti Totoki