The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevent.
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The provided maps display an industrial estate in the
town
of Norbiton and planned future advancement of the site. Overall
, we can clearly see the dramatic changes in the future, in Noribiton, the factory area of the town
will convert into a residential society. Factories will be removed and houses will be installed in the area with other facilities for the people of the town
.
A new road will be made which connect the north and south side
of the society and a housing scheme will built on that road. Followed by a playground, a school, a medical centre and shops will be introduced for the members of the colony.
The farmland is on the north side
of the town
it will shift towards the north-east side
of the society. The residential plots will also
develop on the north side
of the town
near the river and a bridge will connect these houses with the center of the colony.Submitted by saadahmad33102 on
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