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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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The given question describes the letter written to the theatre manager about the
jacket
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 Which was left behind after a film.
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, I need to explain about that
jacket
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 like colour,brand and other.
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 in which row I was seated in the film, the hall name in the theatre with the seat number. In the
letter
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 I requested them to deliver my
jacket
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 to my address. My
jacket
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 is from the Pump brand and it is a red colour with a white collar. On the right ,hand it had an anime picture, it was in orange colour.I was seated in a second hall and the name of the hall was Make
over
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 and it was
in
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on
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third
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the third
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 floor of the theatre.The seat number is D26 in the down part. Can you please take any action to find my
jacket
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 because it is my favourite one
.
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When you find my
jacket
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 I'll request you to deliver the same
jacket
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 to cover the address of
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 letter .
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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