The graph below showsaverage carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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line graph illustrates the average Linking Words
caron
dioxide emission per Correct your spelling
carbon
person
in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007, Use synonyms
mesaurments
in metric Correct your spelling
measurements
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tones
.
Correct your spelling
tonnes
Overall
, Portugal and Italy showed Linking Words
the
upward trend Correct article usage
an
while
the United Kingdom and Sweden Linking Words
pepresent
Correct your spelling
represent
present
downward
trend.
In the Correct article usage
a downward
beging
(1967) Portugal had nearly 1 metric Correct your spelling
beginning
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tones
CO2 Change to a singular noun
tone
emmision
per Correct your spelling
emission
emissions
person
and Use synonyms
then
it had rapid Linking Words
grwoth
over the period, In 1997 they reached Correct your spelling
growth
to
5 metric Change preposition
apply
tones
and till 2007 it stayed Use synonyms
remain
. Wrong verb form
remained
Similarly
, Italy started Linking Words
in
just above 4 metric Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
tones
in 1967 and Correct your spelling
tonnes
then
showed Linking Words
continuos
growth till 1997, after that Correct your spelling
continuous
Portugal
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Portugal's
avarage
carbon dioxide per Correct your spelling
average
person
was stable Use synonyms
in
around 7.5 metric Change preposition
at
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tones
.
Correct your spelling
tonnes
In contrast
, the UK gradually decreased the Linking Words
avarage
CO2 Correct your spelling
average
emmision
per Correct your spelling
emission
emissions
person
over the period. It Use synonyms
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
stared
in 1967 Correct your spelling
started
around
11 metric Change preposition
at around
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tones
and Correct your spelling
tons
at the end
of the period it Linking Words
was
stopped around 9 Unnecessary verb
apply
mertic
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metric
tones
.
Sweden presented Use synonyms
a
rapid ups and downs, in 1967, it was close to 9 metric Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Use synonyms
tones
and in 1977 it reached Correct your spelling
tons
to
above 10 metric Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
tones
, after Correct your spelling
tons
that
it gradually dropped down and stopped Add a comma
,that
in
5 metric Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
tones
in 2007.Correct your spelling
tons
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