The graph below showsaverage carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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line graph illustrates the average

caron

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carbon

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dioxide emission per

person

in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007,

mesaurments

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measurements

in metric

tones

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tonnes

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Overall

, Portugal and Italy showed

the

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upward trend

while

the United Kingdom and Sweden

pepresent

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represent

present

downward

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a downward

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trend. In the

beging

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beginning

(1967) Portugal had nearly 1 metric

tones

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CO2

emmision

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emission

emissions

per

person

and

then

it had rapid

grwoth

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growth

over the period, In 1997 they reached

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5 metric

tones

and till 2007 it stayed

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Similarly

, Italy started

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just above 4 metric

tones

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in 1967 and

then

showed

continuos

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continuous

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growth till 1997, after that

Portugal

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Portugal's

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avarage

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average

carbon dioxide per

person

was stable

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around 7.5 metric

tones

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In contrast

, the UK gradually decreased the

avarage

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average

CO2

emmision

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emission

emissions

per

person

over the period. It

was

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stared

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started

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in 1967

around

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at around

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11 metric

tones

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tons

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and

at the end

of the period it

was

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stopped around 9

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metric

tones

. Sweden presented

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rapid ups and downs, in 1967, it was close to 9 metric

tones

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tons

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and in 1977 it reached

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above 10 metric

tones

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tons

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, after

that

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it gradually dropped down and stopped

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5 metric

tones

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tons

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in 2007.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

191 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Average carbon dioxide emissions
CO2 emissions per capita
Trends
Peaks
Fluctuations
Plateau
Spike
Decline
Increase
Comparison
Significant changes
Anomalies
Time frame
Emission trends
Environmental impact
Sustainable practices
Industrial activities
Energy consumption
Fossil fuels
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The graph below showsaverage carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with colleague?

Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

Teachers are not as important as they used to be because of the choice of other alternatives for students, such as online teaching. To what extent to do you agree of disagree?

An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alternative arrangements.