There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?

Global warming could lead to various negative

effect

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to

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the world, including

the

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incremental

of

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nature

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disasters,

along with

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, extreme weather. More and more evidence

are

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found to associate global warming and human activities, including the CO2 released from transportation

as well as

husbandary

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industries,

moreover

, manufacturing and the production of electricities could

also

play essential roles

of

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such

trends. First of all, there are many statistics

prove

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that CO2

emission

is one of the main causes of

temperature

rising,

such

elements are mainly from various transportation,

such

as cars; aircraft; and buses,

while

the population density

continue

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to grow, the situation deteriorating. On top of that, there is

suggestion

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that animal farms

is

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also

the sources of CO2

emission

, as the gas released from animals, which the number undergoes a consistent increase to satisfy the growing demands.

Secondly

, some experts point out the relative between the rise of

temperature

and the era of manufacturing, when the number of factories underwent a surge, so

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the amount of CO2

emission

.

According to

some researchers,

such

changes stimulated the speed of global warming. To slow down the

temperature

rising

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, an agreement is signed by most of

main

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manufacturing countries, aiming to reduce

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CO2

emission

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emissions

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together.

Moreover

, a growing

demands

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for power is

also

considered as a cause of

this

crisis, especially the hydroelectricity, which

produce

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various gas and heat during process. Countries around the world

continuely

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continuously

looking for

the

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alternative

solution

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solutions

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to replace

such

methods of electrical production. To summarize, it is inevitable that man-made activities,

such

as eating, traveling,

as well as

using electricity,

associating

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with

temperature

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a temperature

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rising in the Earth. Despite countries around the world

putting

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efforts to reduce the negative effects derived from human activities,

such

trends are expected to continue in the future.