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computer are increasingly used in education in which areas do you think are computers more important in which areas are teachers more important.

#computer #education #areas #computers #teachers
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In recent days technologies have become part of everyday life
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laptop
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 and mobile phones we use these products at least 4 to 5 times a day.There are several reasons for using the computer and it depends on
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a person's
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 job or studies.The usage of
computers
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 for educational purposes has become higher.The
students
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 can easily understand and clear their doubts through
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internet
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.
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 one hand,
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 is a
power
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 tool for education.
computers
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 make studies to understand in
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apply
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easier and the funniest way to
students
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. It helps
students
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 to get things in an easier way and teach many lessons about life.The
students
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 can learn new courses through distance learning or online classes.
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,java and C++ are available on various websites free of cost. From another angle, It is accepted that
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 is no substitute for a real
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. Primarily,
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 should not rely too much on PCs and learn basic skills from their teachers
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 writing abilities by hand should not be forgotten since without a
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 their handwriting or spelling may suffer.
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, an experienced
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 knows what materials to choose for better learning in any subject and gives it cheaper than an unreliable expensive computer. In conclusion,
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 and specifically
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 in the education process can enhance a
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's lesson and the effect of both teachers and
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 on learning is inevitable. Mainly, institutions should supplement traditional teaching with the use of
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 using traditional sources of information
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 as books with a proper lecturer
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