Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There are controversial perspectives heating debate over the fact that how the place of residence should made.Some folks contend that living
new
home should be made Correct article usage
a new
according to
ancient
Correct article usage
the ancient
while
oppose
by saying newly developed house shouldWrong verb form
opposing
made
Change the verb form
make
be made
upto
Correct your spelling
up to
Correct article usage
a person
person
choice.Change noun form
person's
While
each its
own perks,I would contend it is ideal Add a missing verb
has its
to
both mentioned factors. Change preposition
for
According to
first
perspective, who suggests that new Change the article
the first
residence
should rerect in Fix the agreement mistake
residences
old
old fashioned style.Correct word choice
apply
Firstly
,it conserved our culture also
Correct word choice
and also
keep
us Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
touch
with our hysterical history.Change preposition
in touch
Secondly
, by
making Change preposition
apply
same
kind of residences attract tourist attraction which would increase the chance of Change the article
the same
employments
.Fix the agreement mistake
employment
Moreover
, this
idea also
make
Change the verb form
makes
Correct article usage
the
stands
of society symmetrical which would decrease hatred and violence. Correct your spelling
standards
On the other hand
, believers of latter
contend by saying it is Correct article usage
the latter
Correct article usage
a foudamental
foudamental
right for communities to make Correct your spelling
fundamental
residence
Add an article
a residence
according to
his
own need and choice.Correct pronoun usage
their
For instance
, in Pakistan everyone has freedom
of option they can make their Correct article usage
the freedom
lhouse
how they want.Correct your spelling
house
Everone
knows in any society, the standard of living Correct your spelling
Everyone
vary
person to person som few prefer to live in Wrong verb form
varies from
simple
home Add an article
a simple
in contrast
,others want every facility such
as swimming
pool,Correct article usage
a swimming
Correct word choice
and Jym
Jym
garden in their homes. To summarise,both viewpoints Correct your spelling
a
has
their own positive effects on any community.Change the verb form
have
However
, I support with latter idea according
to believe,it has more beneficial impacts Change preposition
because
for
Change preposition
on
community
.Add an article
the community
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion