The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the process of manufacturing carbonated drinks.

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producing

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the production

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of carbonated drinks

consist

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consists

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of 5 stages, which are

water

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cleaning, heating evaporation and carbonation, mixing, filtering and filling, and packaging. In the first

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, raw

water

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is filtered and softened by adding chemicals.

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, the

water

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is heated and cooled in a pipe prior to carbon dioxide gas

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injected to create the fizziness of the drink.

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is the second

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of the process. The third

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involves mixing the carbonated

water

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with various ingredients,

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as colouring, syrup, and flavours. The mixture is

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filtered again to remove any impurities. In the fourth

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, the drink is filled into bottles or cans using a machine. The final

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is packaging and delivering the drink to the market. The bottles and cans are packed into boxes and loaded onto trucks.

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, they are transported to supermarkets where they are sold to consumers.