The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
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The charts below illustrate the percentage of
water
used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Overall
, this
gives information about the various uses of water
in North America
, South America
, Europe
, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
.
First of all, in Central Asia
, South East Asia
and Africa more than four-fifths of its proportion is used for agricultural benefits, in contrast
, only 32 per cent is used in Europe
. On domestic usage a large number of water
is consumed in South America
compared to all other countries, Central Asia
and South East Asia
shares
the same proportional ratio of 7 per cent and less than Correct subject-verb agreement
share
fifth
in Correct article usage
a fifth
Europe
.
Eventually, in Europe
more than half is accounted for industrial usage and 48 per cent in North Add a comma
,Europe
America
, followed by 12 % in South East Asia
, furthermore
, in Central Asia
and South East Asia
a small minority of less than one in ten are
taken Unnecessary verb
apply
water
for industry purpose.Submitted by insighttribez on
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