Write about the following topic. Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It can be ostensibly seen that nowadays women's powers are surging more than

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owing to, being

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in the world. Few masses opine that

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ladies play a vital role in the working association

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some opine that guy have a better capacity to handle the business. I would like to say that I partially agree with

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statement and I will explain it clearly in upcoming paragraphs. Commencing with the first site , It might be said that girl

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more task-oriented and they can handle their effort in a calm manner. What is more, having said that, if feminines

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in a reputable community, they can handle any job easily rather than

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and any conflicting

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can be solved by them.

Although

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private industries have a lot of performance for their employer,

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have more flexibility or capability of making a team leader in their management.

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,India

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is a diverse country and there are more than half of

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are working in legitimate companies with good revenue. On the other ,hand boy

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better in some distinguished types of job like soldier works,

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lifting works the reason is that

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women have less physical capacity than dude as well and they are more emotional.

Furthermore

, It could be said that , if males do not

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in the group , some work will not be handled by the ladies

consequently

, industries can face more struggle in the future time.

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, In health care ,company the requirements of

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the boy

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are more than mother since some patients have weight and families cannot lift out.

Therefore

, males should be present in all companies either health-related or in any management.

To conclude

, even though,

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have superior roles in every infrastructure,

guy

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are significant in every job.

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partially

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to

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this

declaration because

mother

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are more emotional but

boy

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boys

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have

also

different qualities. After

thorough

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a thorough

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analysis of

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subject, it is predicted that everyone has a different role in their life.