Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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to them like science Correct your spelling
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as well as
technology. In my own opinion, university
students
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whatever they like.
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other subjects
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those subject
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and they should Correct your spelling
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a subject
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technolgy
so it Correct your spelling
technology
become
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students
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