Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I think
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should be allowed to
study
those
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in which they are interested but on another
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they should even
study
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which
are
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usefull
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useful
to them like science
as well as
technology. In my own opinion,
university
students
should
study
whatever they like. If a
student
is studying his or her
interested
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subject
then
he or she can do
more
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better in that
subject
.
Students
should
study
those
subject
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in which they are interested because in that can do more and more better. Parents should support kids
to select
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in
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which they
are liking
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, if a
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like
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vlogging more,
than
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then
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she should take
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like films and marketing because she will do
more
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better in that
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another
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subject
.
Thus
, there are so many benefits in taking
subject
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in which people are interested so
students
should
study
whatever they like.
Students
should
thinks
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before taking a
subject
which can help them in all ways and can help
finacial
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financially
. The
student
should
study
those
subject
which
are
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usefull
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useful
and they should
study
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subject
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like science, art and
technolgy
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technology
so it
become
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easy for them to get employment.
For example
, every
boys
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boy
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like playing
vollyball
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volleyball
but if a boy
take
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subject
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a subject
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like science and
techonlogy
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technology
.
However
, a person should take advice from another person before selecting
subject
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for
study
.
Hence
,
university
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universities
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should encourage kids in which they are interested.
To conclude
,
both
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is equally important
study
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the
subject
which
student
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students
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like
as well as
study
subject
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a subject
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which is useful. In my own opinion,
university
students
should
allow
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be allowed
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to
study
whatever they like.
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