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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided information shows the
creations
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creation
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 of dairy
on
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yearly in four nations in the
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year
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years
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 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, data is divided into three categories in the amount of
milk
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 in
litres
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 for three
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year
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years
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 (1990, 2000 and 2010).
Also
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,
mentioned
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the mentioned
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 years have the decade of interval.
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,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 is the highest
milk
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 production
county
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country
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 approximately 11 million
litres
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 per
year
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.
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, the lowest
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milk consuming
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milk-consuming
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nations
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nation
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are
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is
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 Guatemala
on
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an
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 average is 55 thousand
litres
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milk
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of milk
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 per
year
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. In Tanzania and Guatemala,
milk
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productions
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production
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 are increased
in
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apply
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every ten
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year
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years
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. In 1990, Tanzania created 87,000
litres
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 and after 20 years have 1,55,000
litres
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.
In addition
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 to that, Guatemala generated 26,000
litres
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 in 1990 and 84,000
litres
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dairy
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of dairy
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 in the
year
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 2010. In
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, the development of
milk
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 is almost similar to the period of 1990, 2000 and 2010. First of all, they produced 11,262,000
litres
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 in 1990.
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, 11,466,000
litres
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 in the
peroid
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period
 of 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, milk, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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