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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided information shows the
creations
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creation
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 of dairy
on
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apply
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yearly in four nations in the
year
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years
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 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, data is divided into three categories in the amount of
milk
 in
litres
 for three
year
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years
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 (1990, 2000 and 2010).
Also
,
mentioned
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the mentioned
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 years have the decade of interval.
Moreover
,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 is the highest
milk
 production
county
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country
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 approximately 11 million
litres
 per
year
.
However
, the lowest
milk consuming
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milk-consuming
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nations
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nation
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are
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is
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 Guatemala
on
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an
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 average is 55 thousand
litres
milk
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of milk
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 per
year
. In Tanzania and Guatemala,
milk
productions
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production
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 are increased
in
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apply
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every ten
year
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years
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. In 1990, Tanzania created 87,000
litres
 and after 20 years have 1,55,000
litres
.
In addition
 to that, Guatemala generated 26,000
litres
 in 1990 and 84,000
litres
dairy
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of dairy
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 in the
year
 2010. In
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, the development of
milk
 is almost similar to the period of 1990, 2000 and 2010. First of all, they produced 11,262,000
litres
 in 1990.
Similarly
, 11,466,000
litres
 in the
peroid
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period
 of 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, milk, litres with synonyms.
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