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Is learning to speak a foreign language as important these days as it was in the past? Write an essay giving your opinion.

#language
Acquiring a new
language
 has always been a crucial point in people's lives. some people believe that,
however
,with the advancement of technology and artificial intelligence, learners are not required to take learning a foreign
language
 seriously. On the one hand,The necessity of learning languages comprehensively needs time and effort and AI can only help to ease learners' path to some extent. Both in everyday life and in numerous positions knowing the ins and outs of a second
language
 is a prerequisite. International marketers,
for instance
, should have the capability to interact and communicate with potential customers in another
language
 like English.
On the contrary
, there is an idea of using tools like Google Translate to proceed with any work.
Although
 these tools can be applied in inevitable circumstances, depending on the situation, in the above-mentioned case ,
for example
, they would be risky and
as a consequence
,they could lose their customers for lack of communication skills. In conclusion, one had better partake in
language
 classes and use different tools in order to excel in all
language
 skills comprehensively.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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