It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no places in the classroom. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Proponents argue that smartphones and related digital gadgets should be banned from learning places
whereas
opponents believe that it should be allowed. In my view of thinking, any kind of electronic device that creates distraction should not be taken inside the Linking Words
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essay completely agrees with the above statement.
First of all, when any student brings a mobile phone to the classroom, he likes to show that off to his fellow classmates. Linking Words
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creates a complete distraction among the little minds, and Linking Words
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ringing or flashing creates a disturbance in the teaching process which is certainly not welcomed by any teacher. Correct your spelling
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others did not have any Linking Words
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in their pockets, and students without gadgets had a clearer understanding of the topic.
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, there are multiple risks associated with electronic Linking Words
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nowadays. Many people face explosion issues with their mobile phones, and some have faced hearing problems after a long usage of the headphones. Use synonyms
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harmful items to the kids inside the classroom can be more dangerous. Linking Words
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