The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph demonstrates how many
people
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attended four
museums
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, which are located in different countries from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
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, the most popular gallery among the four given was the
Louvre
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,
whereas
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the London Science
Museum
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and the
Shenzhen
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Museum
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were the least preferred
museums
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by individuals,
while
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the Vatican
Museums
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obtained second place.
Initially
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, the
number
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of visitors to the
Shenzhen
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Museum
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accounted for 4
million
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, which was almost one-half of the
number
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of
people
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in the
Louvre
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. In 1990, the figures which indicated the
number
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of attendees at the London Science
Museum
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and the
Shenzhen
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Museum
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equalized and the ratio constituted approximately 3
million
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, which was about one-third of the
number
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of
people
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who went to the
Louvre
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in the same year. From 1980 and by the end of the observed timeline the diagram illustrates the
number
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of visitors to the Vatican
Museums
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had been increasing substantially and in 2015 the
number
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of attendees at the Vatican
Museum
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was similar to the
number
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of
people
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who went to the
Louvre
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, which made up more than 9
million
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each. Meanwhile, there was almost a two-
million
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difference between the
number
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of guests at the
Shenzhen
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Museum
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and the London Science
Museum
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, which constituted almost 4
million
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and about 2
million
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visitors, respectively.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, museums, louvre, museum, shenzhen, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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