The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates how many
people
attended four museums
, which are located in different countries from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the most popular gallery among the four given was the Louvre
, whereas
the London Science Museum
and the Shenzhen
Museum
were the least preferred museums
by individuals, while
the Vatican Museums
obtained second place.
Initially
, the number
of visitors to the Shenzhen
Museum
accounted for 4 million
, which was almost one-half of the number
of people
in the Louvre
. In 1990, the figures which indicated the number
of attendees at the London Science Museum
and the Shenzhen
Museum
equalized and the ratio constituted approximately 3 million
, which was about one-third of the number
of people
who went to the Louvre
in the same year.
From 1980 and by the end of the observed timeline the diagram illustrates the number
of visitors to the Vatican Museums
had been increasing substantially and in 2015 the number
of attendees at the Vatican Museum
was similar to the number
of people
who went to the Louvre
, which made up more than 9 million
each. Meanwhile, there was almost a two-million
difference between the number
of guests at the Shenzhen
Museum
and the London Science Museum
, which constituted almost 4 million
and about 2 million
visitors, respectively.Submitted by karolinavash2552 on
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