You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter •give details of where and when you left the bag •describe the bag and its contents •suggest how you could get the bag back

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to register my complaint regarding the lost luggage at the Columbia Station. On 25 September, I visited Columbia Street to make a journey to Vancouver. I still remember that I stood beside the post box on the platform near the elevator around 3 p.m. and left my

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on the white chair.

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, the brand and colour of my

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were GUESS and black. It was a leather luggage with a golden chain. My lost

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contains my permanent residency card, bank cards and train pass.

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incident, I blocked my bank cards. In my opinion, please check the security cameras of the Columbia station for the aforementioned date and time. I have faith in the local police and I am sure that you and your team will be able to find my

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and cards. I really appreciate your time and consideration. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me on 7786546754. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Alex

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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175 words

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion.