You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter •give details of where and when you left the bag •describe the bag and its contents •suggest how you could get the bag back

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to register my complaint regarding the lost luggage at the Columbia Station. On 25 September, I visited Columbia Street to make a journey to Vancouver. I still remember that I stood beside the post box on the platform near the elevator around 3 p.m. and left my

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on the white chair.

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, the brand and colour of my

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were GUESS and black. It was a leather luggage with a golden chain. My lost

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contains my permanent residency card, bank cards and train pass.

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incident, I blocked my bank cards. In my opinion, please check the security cameras of the Columbia station for the aforementioned date and time. I have faith in the local police and I am sure that you and your team will be able to find my

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and cards. I really appreciate your time and consideration. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me on 7786546754. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Alex

shivaniphg123

Sep 29, 2023

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