You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy with the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter, 1. say what the participants liked the hotel 2. explain why they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in the future

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Dear Sir or Madam,
Last
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week, we organized a conference meeting for the company and the meeting was pretty successful. During
this
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meeting, not only people from the company but many celebrities are invited to join. Today, they provided some feedback to me about your hotel and I would like to share that with you. First of all, I would like to thank you for the high-quality services the resort provided. As far as I know, the layout of the conference room is adjusted to fit our needs.
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change is helpful because it allows the host to manage each discussion more efficiently.
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, the hardware support is professional and every participant is satisfied with it.
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, the microphone is of good quality and the battery can
last
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for about eight hours which far more than our meeting requirements.
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, people who participated conference had some negative feedback on the food.
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, the fruits which included bananas and apples were not fresh. I noticed that bananas had some black dots on their surfaces and people did not want to touch them during lunch. Another complaint is about the
seafood
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. Obviously,
seafood
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is more expensive and the maintenance of
seafood
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costs even more. But Adam, the host of the meeting, got sick because of eating the
seafood
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during lunch. My personal suggestion is to change the food providers for your hotel and keep fresh food only.
This
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change would allow more companies to organize meetings in your building. Best wishes.
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