1.The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

1.The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph below displays the proportion of families using various categories of technology in America between 1995 and 1999.
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, the usage of phones, computers and the Internet grew significantly over the entire time period. The washing machine and DVD player had a moderate increase. The most popular device during the period was the washing machine, which surged in those years from 60% to 80%. The second most fashionable machine in 1995 was the computer with 40% of households in the U.S. using it, rising to 70% in 1999. The phone had an obvious increase, where at the beginning it was the second least used with just around 18% of families using it, finalising in 1999 with around 75%, becoming the second most used technology.
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was out of favor with people. It fell back to around 15% in 1995 and
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grew moderately and remained the
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one in 1999 with just 40% of houses employing it.
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