A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter, ● explain what you are currently doing ● describe your suitability for this area of work ● say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your advertisement in our local newspaper called Times , dated 28 Jun 2023. At the moment , I am studying at school.

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, I go to extra lessons. I need an amount of money for them so , I decided to work. If you agree I will work in your restaurant as a waitress. I have experience as a waitress and I worked at a restaurant four months ago. Now , the restaurant is renovated so , I don't work there.

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, I am a driven and ambitious person who is keen to learn more skills. I manage to serve to eaters. I believe I am the best choice for

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position as I have a lot of experience in my previous post. I usually study from 8 until 12 a.m every day except Sunday so , I want to attend an interview on

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day. I appreciate your consideration of

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application and look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. Durdona.

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task response

Provide more detailed information about your current studies and why you believe you are suitable for the job.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the organization of your ideas by using more cohesive devices to connect your sentences and paragraphs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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