The chart shown the minimum number of days spent per week on sport and exercise by young people in Canada. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the imformation shown below.

The bar chart shows the amount of
time
that 12 to 17-year-olds in Canada spend per
week
on sport and exercise. It is clear from the chart that
girls
are less active in their leisure
time
than
boys
There is a noticeable difference between the percentages of
boys
and
girls
who participate in sport for more than an hour three times a
week
. About one-third of
girls
devote over an hour of their
time
three times a
week
to active leisure pursuits
while
this
applies to over half of the
boys
. There is a similar difference between the percentage of very active young people. Almost 1 in 10
boys
between the ages of 12 and 17 play sport for an hour at least 6 days a
week
. The figure for young women is only 1 in 20. A closer examination of the figures for young people who actually participated in physical activity reveals that the greater proportion dedicates at least 3 days per
week
to these pastimes.
This
is true of about 80 per cent of both
boys
and
girls
. The fact that
girls
generally spend close to 10 per cent less
time
on average on physical activities than boy raise questions about how fit young women are in comparison to young men.
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