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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated by the IT
industry
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 and the
Service
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industry
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 of the UK between the years 1992 and 2000. It is measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be seen that both IT and
Service
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 industries increased as a rate of
GDP
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 by the end of the period, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout the time,
although
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 there is a slight fluctuation. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the IT
industry
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 accounted for over 6 per cent of
GDP
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.
Moreover
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, IT just fell below 8% from being slightly above it.
Then
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, It drastically grew by one and half times more than what it was in the previous year and reached approximately 15 per cent by the end of the given time.
In contrast
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, At the beginning of the times shown in the table, the
Service
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industry
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 contributed less to the
GDP
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 compared to IT. Between 1992 and 1994 there was a significant growth of over 2 per cent for the
service
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industry
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.
However
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, it still made the least contribution to the gross domestic product and by the year ,2000 IT made almost twofold times more contribution to the
GDP
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words industry, service, gdp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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