Reading books now has a declining trend
while
there are sharp increase among
children
playing computer
games
or watching TV. Several
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might be that reading a
book
would require
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and
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time
to get the
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such
as
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conflict resolution or getting the answer that
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has offered),
on the other
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such
computer
games
offer
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reward
through solving serial
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the game. As a
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, I still agree with
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generation that
children
should read more
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,
while
also
concentiouslyCorrect your spelling
conscientiously
contentiously
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their screen
time
. Here is some point of view I had regarding
this
topic.
Reading a
book
is good, I strongly agree. Why? because it added more knowledge to the reader, more understanding to
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, and
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the reader more perspective about life.
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itself could
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into two
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,
such
as
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and Non-fiction books. To put it simply,
fictions
are often not a real
event
, it could be
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or a story about a person/
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never happened or could be based on some
event
but not entirely the same.
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, in my
opinion
,
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imagination,
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the readers perspective about the character that
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narrated.
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the readers
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room to imagine a special
event
that happened in the
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world and take lessons in the story. On
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hand,
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fictions
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a
book
that
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strictly on a real
event
or that has references to
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real research that has been done by scientists.
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fictions
gives
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readerFix the agreement mistake
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a Correct article usage
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new knowledge about
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current affairs or updates in sciences world. These two
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of
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children
toCorrect article usage
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broaden their knowledge,
while
also
cultivateChange the form of the verb
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their empathy, emotion, and imagination as a human.
This
is why in my
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children
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reading.
On the other hand
, having some
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time
one or two hours a week
such
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a computer game should not
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as wasting
time
. As a human, we need to relax and refresh our
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from work or school. So, It is okay to allocate
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hours a week to
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games
or watching
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TV.
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should be wise to give
children
their "fun"
time
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hours a week.
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could design
this
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time
as a
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when the
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finished their
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as
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children
. Limiting
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"
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" in my
opinion
is unwise. Strict parents would only create
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. Because
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part of
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humaneCorrect article usage
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trait to seek something fun, so strictly prohibited it would be unwise in my
opinion
.
In conclusion, reading a
book
is good for
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growth and cultivating their human aspect before
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the community.
While
reading a
book
and limiting playing
games
should
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, being very strict
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childrenChange noun form
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fun-timesCorrect your spelling
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is unwise because it is part of their development.
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should be wise to use the
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as
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children
and not strictly
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them.