Nowadays, a lot of people change the way of smoking: from conventional cigarettes to electronic ones. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this statement.
Smoking is injurious to health
therefore
, in any form
it is not beneficial for health Add a comma
,form
as well as
for environment
. These days, people are changing their way of consumption of Add an article
the environment
this
. They are adopting electronic cigarettes
instead
of conventional one
. Correct pronoun usage
ones
This
eassay
going to discuss Correct your spelling
essay
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the prons
prons
and cons in Correct your spelling
pros
following
paragraphs.
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the following
To begin
with, conventional cigarettes
are made of paper and its dricetly
harm to your body. Correct your spelling
directly
Inaddition
, it is going to have Correct your spelling
In addition
direct
detrimental Add an article
a direct
affect
on Replace the word
effect
person's
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a person's
organ
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organs
for instance
, thirty percentes
of Correct your spelling
per cent
population
are additicted to Add an article
the population
smoke
and have cancer like disease . Replace the word
smoking
Moreover
, the mode of consuming it can be different however
, it is going to produce some sort of advers
effect Correct your spelling
adverse
in
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on
individuals
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individuals'
individual's
body
who Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
litterely
taste it.
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literally
In contrast
, electronic cigarettes
are more safe
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safer
whilst
conventional Change preposition
than
one
. Correct pronoun usage
ones
Its
Correct pronoun usage
It
dose
not produce any kind of fumes Correct your spelling
does
and
harmful substances which affect the people who consume it . Correct word choice
or
Moreover
, it's safe for non -smoker
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smokers
for
some Change preposition
to
extend
because it is not going to harm directly to anybody Replace the word
extent
such
as, there are many incidence
where people Fix the agreement mistake
incidents
did
not smoke , Wrong verb form
do
than
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then
also
they are in danger because of Rephrase
apply
cigarettes
smoke.
Change the noun form
cigarette
To conclude
, there are many drawback
of smoking, in any condition it's not advisable Change to a plural noun
drawbacks
thus
, whether it is conventional or electronic cigarettes
it has plethora
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a plethora
affect
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of affect
in
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on
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the individuals
individuals
body.Fix the agreement mistake
individual
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