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A local council is planning to redevelop its existing civic centre. The diagrams below show the propes changes to the civic centre. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A local council is planning to redevelop its existing civic centre. The diagrams below show the propes changes to the civic centre. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The display diagram shows a local
council
 is planning to redevelop its existing civic
centre
as well as
 the
propes
Correct your spelling
proposed
 changes to the civic
centre
. The civic
centre
 will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for
new
Correct article usage
the new
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. In old, in A Avenue is in
concert
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the concert
a concert
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hall
,
near by
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nearby
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 concert
hall
 there is two car
park
.
In
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On
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 the left side of
council
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the council
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office
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,office
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 there is
exhibition
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an exhibition
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hall
 and
in
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on
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right
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the right
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 side there is
library
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the library
a library
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. between
car
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the car
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park
 and
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the library
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library
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,library
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 there is
small
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a small
the small
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 shopping
center
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centre
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. In
plans
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the plans
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 for
new
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the new
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, there is
theatre
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a theatre
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 and
council
 office in C street,
open
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an open
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park
 and
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an undergroud
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undergroud
Correct your spelling
underground
 car
park
 is there between
council
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the council
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 office and
exhibition
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the exhibition
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hall
. The shopping
centre
 is as it is. The change
are
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is
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 made in
open
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an open
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park
 and
undergroud
Correct your spelling
underground
park
.
To conclude
, the above data describes the existing and new
plan
Fix the agreement mistake
plans
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words council, centre, hall, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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