Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

Dear angpasang, First of
all
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I like to say happy birthday to you. As you ask for
suggestion
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suggestions
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I
like
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tolike
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give you some. I think it should be the grand
party
and invite all our college
friend
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friends
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make
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sure no
one
will left behind. Make sure you wear
nice
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a nice
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dress as I know your black colour is
feveroit
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fever it
one
so I suggest you wear
black
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a black
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suit. I will
also
try to match with you.
In addition
, let's celebrate
this
birthday
on
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at
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Pasang
party
place as it
match
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with
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apply
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your name and it is
a
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the
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best
party
place we have in our town. We must present some best
DJ
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DJs
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for rock the
party
and I'm going to bring
one
of your
fevereoit
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fevered
DJ
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DJs
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John he is
very
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a very
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good and famous DJ in our country. Even though he is
bit
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a bit
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expensive we must bring him
in
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on
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your birthday because
this
birth day
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birthday
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will
last
one
we celebrate together because I am going to
canada
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Canada
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for permanent residece so I will be not able to come for
anothe
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another
time. so let's enjoy together and rock the
party
as
usaul
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usual
we used to do. your best friend, Nima
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