The line gragh shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line gragh shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The above line graph shows the 2 types of visiting numbers in the
UK
over a 20-year period,
while
the below bar chart illustrates the counts of
UK
tourists in 5 different countries in 1999.
Overall
, we can see that the visiting numbers were both in increased trends and the most popular countries in 1999 for
UK
residents were France.
Firstly
, despite facing a slight upward trend from 1979 to 1985, visits abroad type counts significantly grew from 20
million
in 1985 to more than 50
million
in 1999.
However
, there was not the same behaviour on visits to the
UK
section starting from 10
million
in 1979
then
steadily growing to 28
million
in 1999. Focusing on the 5 most popular countries in 1999, the most popular was France which had more than 10
million
British people visited in 1999. The second most visited country was Spain which had 9
million
British tourists.
Furthermore
, Greece, the USA, and Turkey shared almost the same numbers at below 5
million
.
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