A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.– Describe your point of view. – Say what you like about the show and why. – Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my feedback about the TV
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last
Sunday.
I am Jennifer Onasis, a Journalism student at Ulster University, and a regular reader of your press. Last
Sunday's edition your reporter was biased and extremely critical of the Television program
Debate with Anna. It is obvious to the readers that the reporter intentionally skips the positive side of the program
and focuses on the negative.
I have been watching regularly that TV show for the last
six years, and the quality of the content is remarkable of the programme, and it
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prised
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praised
relevent
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program
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The reporter was partial and unacceptably biased. most of his allegations are evidenceless and fabricated which is not to report
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public media. I request you to investigate Correct article usage
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further
evidence.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer OnasisSubmitted by ck.manshad on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or topic to improve coherence and cohesion.
Task Achievement
Address the prompt more directly and provide a more balanced response to the reporter's complaints to improve task achievement.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite