The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans.
The diagram illustrates the stages in how three
cocoa
products
are created from the whole beans.Overall
, the process includes three main stages commences
with collecting raw ingredients and culminating in delivering Wrong verb form
commencing
products
to the consumer and providing cocoa
liquor
to the industry.
Firstly
, the ripe pods are harvested and then
they are broken to remove their shells.Once the beans are collected, they are dried in order to eliminate the moisture inside and through pressing steps, the cocoa
liquor
is formed. After
this
point, the cocoa
liquor
is processed in two ways.
In the first method of processing, the former product goes through a further
pressing period so that the cocoa
cake is produced. Cocoa
cake continues to be grind and two final products
are generated. Cocoa
powder, which is delivered to the consumer and cocoa
liquor
, a primary ingredient to make cakes and drinks in the chocolate industry.
In the second method, the initial cocoa
liquor
is further
refined and created industrial chocolate. At the same time, sugar is added, the finished chocolate products
are formed after the final processing step and this
is consumed by people afterwards.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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