All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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been a headline-grabbing topic in recent years, and some believe that there should be a total transition from traditional fuel-burning

cars

to electric

cars

.

This

essay disagrees with the

startement

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statement

above because banning

gasoline

cars

leads to potential environmental problems, and traditional

cars

still serve as more convenient vehicles

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to electric ones.

To begin

with, a blanket ban on

gasoline

cars

is not

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friendly——contrary to the initial purpose of promoting electric substitutions. Without

gasoline

cars

, enormous

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of

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that have been dug up will struggle to be sold.

As a result

, corporations might pour those fuels into the ocean to minimize the loss of profits, resulting in irreparable worldwide pollution. What’s more,

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amount of

cars

will be reduced to

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which

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recycling industry can’t cope with in time. Mountains of

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wastes

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will destroy the living environment. Keeping fuel-consuming

cars

on the road not only benefits the environment

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but

also

makes

traveling

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long

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more convenient,

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to

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electric

cars

.

For instance

, one fully filled-up tank can carry the driver farther,

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to a fully charged electric one, and faster as well. I recall watching a YouTuber trying to cross America on wheels. It took him twice as long to achieve the goal in Tesla,

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a

gasoline

car.

To sum up

,

although

electric

cars

have a promising future, the convenience of

fuel -burning

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fuel-burning

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cars

shouldn’t be neglected, neither should the potential environmental damage of banning them totally. The industry should not replace traditional

cars

with electric ones 100%.