Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your latter Gives details of how you and your friends or family use the center. Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community. Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes

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Hello, Dear the leader of the council.

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with, Some people inform you of the wrong features. I will know all of the circumstances about leading sports

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. We were not to keep extra sportsmen's payment. We used the centre to improve their skills and to achieve

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high achievements. As

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above, growing their skills leisure centre is essential for the local company. Writing about the main effects our sportsmen got high result during playing abroad. If there is be closed, what will be the young generation's situation

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So, I would ask that, please, Help to Keep our community, help us improve and go on. I am looking forward to expecting your justly decision. Sincerely: Jumayeva Sarvinoz

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

119 words

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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