The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
Changes of people who went for international travel in 1990,1995,200,and 2005, are represented by the table below.
Overall
,it is quite obvious that the total number
of people internationally traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
increases
over the years in the shown regions.
2005 had the highest total Wrong verb form
increased
number
of travels in the majority of the regions mentioned. Europe managed to had
the highest Change the verb
have
number
of 400.2 million
in 2005.While
the Middle East had the lowest number
of 9.8 million
in 1990. Yet, Asia and
the Correct word choice
apply
pacific
, and Africa increased gradually Capitalize word
Pacific
overtime
. Asia and the Correct your spelling
over time
pacific
started with 60.2 Capitalize word
Pacific
million
in 1990 and ended up with 135.8 million
in 2005. Furthermore
, Africa began with 18.2 million
and was done with 28.7 million
in 2005.
On the other hand
, America unlike the rest of the areas had fluctuations over the years. It started with 80.5 million
in 2005 and steeply increased till it reached 118.2 million
in 2000. Then
decreased dramatically to reach 113.2 million
international travels
in 2005.Replace the word
travellers
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