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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Many people believe that studying in groups is more acceptable
while
 some believe that individual
study
 is preferable for school
students
. In
this
 ,essay we will discuss both sides of the
study
. Both have some benefits and drawbacks. On the one hand, some people believe that
group
study
 is better because,
while
 studying in a
group
 many
students
 share their thoughts and knowledge,
therefore
 they can solve complicated mathematical problems.
Group
study
also
 provides a better environment
therefore
, all
students
 in the
group
 can easily memorize things and can practice by asking questions with each other. Communicating with each other and discussing problems and their solutions can improve their
communication
skills
.
On the other hand
, some
students
 cannot focus on studying in a
group
. In the
group
 ,
study
 there may be a student who is not serious about his studies he/she can be a serious problem for others. Because of him/,her no one in the
group
 can focus and get good marks in the exam. In
self-
study
,
students
 will have a quiet ambience
therefore
,
students
 can focus and
study
 well. There is no
communication
 with others,
this
 may weaken your
communication
skills
. Explaining and discussing problems in front of others
,
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 will build up your confidence and presentation
skills
. In my opinion,
group
study
 is better than
self-
study
 because
students
 have a lot more chances to strengthen their confidence, and
communication
/presentation
skills
. In conclusion, both
self-
study
 and
group
study
 have their own pros and cons, but
group
study
 outweighs the advantages of
self-
study
.
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