Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided tables illustrate the amounts of two Pleductsisales figures of fairtrade Labellad Coffer and bananas.over a period of five years in different five European countries, per millions of
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, it is evident that
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coffee
coffe
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coffee
and Bananas are experienced the highest sellers
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swizerland
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Switzerland
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UK over the two charts,
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with
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commonalities, considering the coffee table
while
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Switzerland
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achieved the highest
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in 1999,and accounted for 3
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of
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euros
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, it accomplished the second
sales
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rate
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in 2004 at 6
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euros
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, followed by
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which reached
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20
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after being 1.5 at the beginning.
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for
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table, Swizerang recorded the highest
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rate
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in 1999 and started with 15
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, albeit it finished with the same highest level in 2004 and boasted 47
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, bringing uk at the second
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in 2004 Just constituted 5.5
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, and in 1999 at merely 1
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,
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, the coffee
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in Denmark
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inBanana's
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,
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depicted 1.8
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euros
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in 1999,
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Denmark ended at 2
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of
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euros
in 2004.
for Coffee
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, it started with the
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same
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figure
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Banana's
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one
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. It is noteworthy that
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rate
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are Sweden and Belgium art 1999 respectively gained 0.8 and 0.6 and in 2004 Sweden and Denmark were at
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1 and
0.9
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "similarly".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the seventh paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, euros, rate, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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