Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects.But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are good at or find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. .

The school education system is the major pillar

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a balanced person.

However

, there is an argument about studying

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curriculum, a part of the community believes, that pupils should give their attention to the whole subject

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, and others debate, that the students should identify their own eagerness on the syllabus, and concentrate on those areas. Here, I strongly believe, that teenagers should focus on the complete subject

area

because it is impossible to reach the final exam destinations without complete knowledge. Even though, youngsters could make a decision about their majorings as per their own wish. On the one hand, nowadays, the primary and tertiary educational systems consist of numerous contents

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reason,

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, who are willing to complete higher studies, it is mandatory to study total

subjects

areas,

otherwise

, they would not be eligible to pass the examinations.

For instance

, Sinhala language and mathematics are critical

subjects

in Sri Lankan ordinary-level examinations because if someone fails these

subjects

,

this

reason is caused to fail the examination totally.

Therefore

, balanced educational attention is paramount to

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future targets. Despite

this

, a personal positive attitude to any

area

is an undeniable motivation factor for any human, owing to

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reason, a student who has a talent and enthusiasm about some specific

area

could change his complete life positively.

For example

, there are many numbers of Nobel price holders, who failed in the schooling system, but they could reach their life goals through the specific curriculum even though these kinds of people are very few on earth, majority of the young people end their education

due to

unbalance study pattern. In conclusion, as responsible citizens, everyone should encourage our younger generation to adopt balanced learning works.

Otherwise

, it will affect their sustainable future inversely.

Hence

, I strongly trust,

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muti-tasked attention

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given

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subjects

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programme is vital for our young citizens.

Nevertheless

, without the correct guidance of elders, it is difficult to prepare the mindset

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of the children on the total program positively.