The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate several kinds of paths in how
Canada
and Australia
access
the news
. Generally, Canada
dominated the percentage of all ways of accessing the news
more than Australia
, but it can be seen that Australia
was higher in the online accessing news
.
To begin
with, accessing the news
on TV was the most popular one in Canada
at 40%. Meanwhile, the other paths that were not specified just had 3 percent
of all accessing ways. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
followed by online access
which had 36%. The same thing happened in Australia
where the lowest path of accessing the news
is not specified, which was 2%, 1 percent
lower than in Change the spelling
per cent
Canada
. On the other hand
, access
to the news
on TV in Australia
was lower by 3% than in Canada
which had 37%.
In addition
, the percentage of Online access
in Australia
was more dominant than the other aspects, including Canada
. It had 52% of accessing news
that had half of the data in Australia
, and 16% higher than online access
in Canada
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia, access, news with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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