The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate several kinds of paths in how
Canada
and
Australia
access
the
news
. Generally,
Canada
dominated the percentage of all ways of accessing the
news
more than
Australia
, but it can be seen that
Australia
was higher in the online accessing
news
.
To begin
with, accessing the
news
on TV was the most popular one in
Canada
at 40%. Meanwhile, the other paths that were not specified just had 3
percent
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of all accessing ways.
Then
followed by online
access
which had 36%. The same thing happened in
Australia
where the lowest path of accessing the
news
is not specified, which was 2%, 1
percent
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per cent
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lower than in
Canada
.
On the other hand
,
access
to the
news
on TV in
Australia
was lower by 3% than in
Canada
which had 37%.
In addition
, the percentage of Online
access
in
Australia
was more dominant than the other aspects, including
Canada
. It had 52% of accessing
news
that had half of the data in
Australia
, and 16% higher than online
access
in
Canada
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia, access, news with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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