People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and the latest Technology.Do the disadvantage of this trend outweigh its advantage.

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are running after new
tech
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fashion
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emulate
evaluate
their peer they throw away old clothes and gadgets .
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disturbing
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self-esteem
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whereas
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tech
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gadgets
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find no takers . First and foremost,blindly following
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trend
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in
fashion
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tech
gadegets
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gadgets
is an expensive habit.
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adolescent
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fashion
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tech
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.
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always
end up in debt.
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this
habit promotes
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consumerism
in society which is
also
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, kids
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new clothes and
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i-phones
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iPhones
.
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promotes consumerism and
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spending .
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beleive
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believe
this
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has more
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then
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prerogatives
.
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, following
latest
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trends
in
fashion
and
tech
gadets
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gadgets
promotes innovation in
technology
. It
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fashion
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and
technology
industry and
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them to launch new products every quarter. citizens who follow
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trends
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in demand
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these products ,
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economy
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too.
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new
technology
.Still
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think
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more disadvantages than
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advantages
.
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,
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trend
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sign , it has
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effect on individuals .most of
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people have low
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and
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promotes
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nature among humans. living in
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detrimental
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a detrimental
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effect on personal finance. I
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believe
belief
that following
trends
in
fashion
and
technology
has more impediments than benefits.
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