The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where

relevant.
The supplied illustration gives information about observations in various
years
in one university.
Overall
, almost all aspects of a university have an improvement in each year, on the
contrary
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the range of modules offered declined every period in the table. As can be seen, teaching quality had a small decrease from 65 per
cent
in 2000 to 63 in 2005, but despite
this
factor after five
years
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measurement had risen like never before. The print resources had a percentage of over 80% every time period. Meanwhile, electronic resources rocketed from 45 per
cent
in 2000 to 72 per
cent
in 2005, and
then
climbed to 88 per
cent
after 5
years
.
However
, the modules that were offered by the university were 32 in 2000,
then
slightly fell to 30,
after
this
in 2010 percentage declined again to 27. At the same time number of buildings or facilities that was used for teaching remained constant over the period and accounted for 77 per
cent
of all 10
years
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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