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Band 4.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You recently ordered an item that was advertised as having a discount from the normal price, but you have found that when you paid, you did not get the discount. Write to the company. In your letter •Explain that you did not get the discount •Tell them where you saw the discount advertised •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to you because I recently ordered
iPhone
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an iPhone
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 that was advertised as having a discount from the normal price.
However
, I have found that when I paid, I did not get the discount. I saw an ad on
YOU TUBE
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YouTube
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 a week ago.
Name
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The name
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 of
this
 ad is UZUM MARKET. In
this
 advertisement, the price of
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the iPhone14
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iPhone14
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iPhone
 was said to be five million five hundred thousand.
However
, seven million was deducted from my card.
Also
, the phone you
give
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gave
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 me is an
IPhone13
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iPhone 13
, not an
iPhone14
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iPhone 14
. I want you to give half of my money back. If you do not agree with what I said, I will complain to the appropriate places. Let me know if you get my mail. You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is: +998971733007. I think you understand me. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rashidova Laziza
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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