Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, more and more people are said to have

inclination

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towards different ways of

treatment

rather than visiting a therapist

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and

follow his

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prescriptions.

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essay will argue how different are the conditions regarding

this

issue from both negative and positive

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. Considering a type of

an

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illness, measures that are taken are varied, and there is no need

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a specialist to cure an ill

person

with

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serious disease. A

person

suffering from a temporary backache, for example, can find his

treatment

in medications available,

such

as ointment in drugstores.

Moreover

, it creates less crowded clinics and hospitals which are more suitable for more severe illnesses that are in need of urgent services. When a

person

who catches

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consumes herbal tea

as well as

acquires less physical activity, provides an opportunity for doctors in the clinics or health

centers

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putting

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their time and energy

to service

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other important patients.

However

, the case is not the same

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all

occasion

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. The more serious the illness, the more in need of visiting a specialist. Those who have cancer or cardiovascular illnesses should take

this

matter into account, and visit their doctor regularly. Not only does it provide them with a better way of

treatment

based on science and technology,

such

as specific facilities and equipment (

radio therapy

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radiotherapy

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and injection) available only in hospitals, but it can

also

give them a chance

of communicating

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with those who are in the same situation

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and gaining experience.

Thus

, it is imperative for some occasions to visit their therapist.

To sum up

, with regard to the case of illness, we can decide whether it is a preferable action to visit a doctor or not. To be cured by specific

treatment

methods is necessary

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some serious issues,

while

in other occasions that are not that

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hard, a

person

can rely on normal

treatment

available everywhere.