Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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causes horrible sound,

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money

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re-building bigger airports. They said that one cause

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in vacation period.

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all flights. In my perspective,

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not the main issue and taxing

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normal

people

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every rich person which is unfair.

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crazy sounds more than anything in the world.

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country with a lot of cars that create unhealthy

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in town.

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the ground.

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not a good solution.

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I totally disagree with

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: <4

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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248 words

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