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Question: The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Question: The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph describes how many
minutes
 of telephone calls in
UK
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the UK
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, local fixed
line
, national and international-fixed
line
,
mobiles
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and mobiles
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 between 1995 and 2002.
It is clear that
 the
Local-fixed
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Local
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line
 was been talked
the
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about the
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 most,and
mobiles
 started to become
popularity
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popular
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 in 2000.
Intially
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Initially
, in 1995 the British talked
more
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for more
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 than 70
billion
minutes
while
 national and international fixed
line
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lines
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about
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for about
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 37
billon
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billion
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minutes
.At
first,
the amount of community used
mobiles
were
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was
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standed
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stood
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 at 3
billion
minutes
.It can be seen that from 1995 to 1999 there was an went up gradually in local fixed
line
 reached to 90
billion
minutes
 but from that to 2002, the
firgues
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figures
 for individuals called local fixed
line
 dropped sharply to 72
billion
minutes
. On the one hand , the national and international fixed
line
 climbed up in each
years
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year
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 and
reach
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reached
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 61
billions
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billion
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 in 2002
while
 began only approximately 38
billion
minutes
.
Additionally
,
the
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apply
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mobiles
 attracted the majority and became popular in 2002 since the
mobiles
 increased sharply through each year.
However
, in 1995 the number of people called
mobiles
were
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was
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 only 3
billion
minutes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line, mobiles, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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