University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?

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society, an education is the most important thing in adult
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enormously
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landing a job and
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their
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conveniently.
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many people believe that university education should rely on
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studies and the
degree
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they get, others think that social
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is more essential in
employement
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employment
. In my point of view, I moderately disagree with spending time on social skills rather than educational
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and I will outline the reasons below.
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, an obtained
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theoretical
knowledge depending on
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of interest,
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as
bachelor's
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a bachelor's
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degree
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, is crucial for a person to complete any given task. The more you educate yourself, the more unique you get.
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, students with master's
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degree
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are getting an offer with higher salaries in job applications among other
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graduates
.
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no doubt that the condensed course schedules put a strain
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teenagers to socialize, more often than not campus activities give an
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opportunity
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them getting
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social skills and
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networking.
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, an enriched university
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is partly attributed to the financial
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of the students, which in
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case could create a
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vicious
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cycle if a person is not able to conveniently sustain their own
spendings
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, which could cause them to
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more time
to work
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in the future.
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, focusing on
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enjoyable social part of
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campus
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rather than the
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side could
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in
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a struggle
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to become an independent person in terms of
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and social. In conclusion, during
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period of time, pupils ought to concentrate on their
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skills to develop.
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, indeed the idea of supporting getting
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university
degree
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over social
life
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is more aggreable.
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