The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
The line graph illustrates the median group of people in the UK travelling daily by
car
, bus
, and train
over a period
of 60 years
.
Overall
, travelling by car
and train
showed a steady but significant rise over the period
. While
a
number of commuters, who use Correct article usage
the
bus
has fallen over the term.
In 1970 the travelling by car
and train
were nearly 5,4 and 2,6 million
respectively. The number of car
users
frantically increased by 6 million
by 1990. The bus
and Correct quantifier usage
number of bus
train
consumers were constant until 2000, but then
the bus
Correct quantifier usage
number of bus
users
tostarted
Correct your spelling
started
to started
Fix the infinitive
to deteriorate
deteriorate
throughout the Wrong verb form
deteriorating
period
and it reached the nadir of 3 million
. The car
and train
consumers were permanent from 2000 to 2010 years
.
In the
early 2010 Correct article usage
apply
years
, car
users
started to grow up
slowly until 2020 Change preposition
apply
years
, and following years
car
and train
users
surged frantically to 2030 years
. They arrived vertec
of approximately 3 and 9 Correct your spelling
vertex
million
properly the end of period
.Add an article
the period
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