The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates how the top ten countries consumed and produced
electricity
in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that China has the highest consumption and Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
and Korea has the lowest. It can be measured in billion Use synonyms
Use synonyms
KWh
.
Fix capitalization
kWh
To begin
with, the Linking Words
electricity
usage for China stood at 5 ,398 Use synonyms
KWh
in 2014 which decreased slightly to 5,322 Use synonyms
KWh
in the Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
. United States had 4,099 for the creation of electric Use synonyms
power
in 2014 Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
power
Use synonyms
intake
accounted for 3,866. The consumption and Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
for Russia Use synonyms
was
1,057 and 1,038 respectively. Change the verb form
were
Following
Linking Words
this
, the electric Linking Words
power
creation for Japan started with 936.2 which was minimally higher than the Use synonyms
intake
capacity of 856.7 Use synonyms
KWh
in 2014.
Use synonyms
Subsequently
, India had 871 for the Linking Words
power
supply and reduced to approximately 689.8 in the Use synonyms
intake
of Use synonyms
electricity
. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
, Canada and France followed a similar pattern in the usage and Linking Words
production
of nuclear Use synonyms
power
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Brazil, Germany and Korea accounted for Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
in
the Change preposition
apply
production
and Use synonyms
intake
of Use synonyms
electricity
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, kwh, power, intake with synonyms.
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